Gawd Dayum i DO hate it when that shit happens. I remember i was trying to add someone on myspace but their page lagged so much that the mouse kept missing the "add" button! But i do Love this flash. I was pissing myself when the heavy music came on. Well done :D
I enjoyed the song, never heard the band before although it reminded me of Slayer very much. Had some nice frame by frame animation and I thought it was interesting that you told us how many tweens you used. The character was also cool I thought. Not bad...
Soundtrack was awesome worked really well, artwork and animation was very stylish especially for the pencil tool. Well done, this is going into my favourites...
Well first of all, the beeping sound in the pre loader... FUCKING ANNOYING! I made the same mistake of putting a sound on a loop in the pre loader in one of my flashes and that annoyed me and all my friends. I had to turn the sound off while this was loading. Anyway about the flash... Well I found it really confusing and I just didnt know what was going on. The story was... well I dont know I didnt watch the whole thing it just seemed to be the same thing over and over. I have no idea why the file size was so big but that made the beeping in the preloader even more annoying as it took so long to load. Work on your story and you should try and draw your own things and not just use sprites. I know I'm being harsh but if you want to improve your gonna have to be told these things. I dont know if this submission will pass the judging as I find newgrounds viewers quite unpredictable but in my opinion I think you need to improve this before it gets on to the site. So bottom line: imrpove your story, improve artwork, get rid of beeping in pre loader and make it more interesting in general.
Some of the bits made me chuckle like how the pink one rolled to move and the first time the purple one threw up but that aside I didnt really enjoy the flash in general. I thought the idea was rather cliche and recycled. That might have been your aim as how the purple guy said something like "In every cartoon there's a conflict, and Im that conflict" but still I didnt really enjoy the flash in general. Make the story a little more interesting and have better audio and I might like it next time.
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Review panel: 3/10
I actually found the crumby singing quite amusing, it could be one of your gimmicks so dont bother getting singing lessons. Quite a good parody the audio was deffinitly better than the visual. Good job
Suprisingly good looking for the pencil tool. I find it never really looks awesome. The ending was classic. Good job :D
Not bad for 2003
Considering your going to read this because youre even alive i thought id just say that my band has made a song about you. Nice vid please dont haunt me.
Well not really cuz i ruined it when i watched it at ur place but i liked it the first time i watched it. Thank god the splash is fixed. You could do something good on flash if u cood be arsed.
What the balls arse ?
suprisingly good animation for 1 hours work. Not much u can do with one voice clip but it wood be good if u made a longer cartoon like this. Good to see the paint brush tool also. Sllab fuck...
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